Hey guys!! Welcome! Class is in session!!
Hiyah! So today, I'm gonna be giving you guys some tips and advice on hos to make good Stories!!
(I've probably done about two of these already but- I'm constantly picking up new skills so I'd like to share them with you guys!!))
I'd love nothing more than to see my peeps excel at writing or something!! Okay! Shall we begin!!
Okay! So, Rule number one if you're making a reader insert!!
Use the word 'You' to refer to the reader instead of 'I'.
I only say this because when you use the word I, it makes the story sound like it's not about the reader, it's about Yourself and it's hard for people to really feel apart of the story. (At least that's just my experience.))
People are more likely to read your stories if you use 'You' instead because that puts the reader actually in the story! Not to say that your insert is bad if you do use I, because i've read good ones.
It's just that people are more likely to stop and actually read the story when